Certainly Love

I made extreme edits to this one, but will post when it's ready.

…But looking at them now, Shiny, glossy, reflective; I find it somewhat strange How it was in the covered clock faces Looks like this stanza it needs a little revision. ...

Every now and then we need to move words around to make them fit. I always have to read my writing again and again to find a good flow. It ...

Interesting story. The only thing I would change, would be "I was born like it." Maybe the best way to flow and make sense is, "I was born like this." ...

Cool. I wonder what she wrote to him. I have been in these types of situations before when I was young. Indeed, awkward.

How very visual. This is more like girl wanting to live in a fantasy world rather than the world she is in now? This is a very short story. I ...

This seems a little to teeny bopper for me, but I am sure the young ones will appreciate and relate. Very good writing, keep it up. Minor errors here and ...

Sounds like a story we are all familiar with. We can find it in movies and t.v. shows. No one ever wants to tell someone how they really feel. I ...

Sounds like you live where Autumn comes year round. :) Cool.

Edits have been made!

Not sure if this is showing up in the feed. :(

Interesting...This does seem a little disturbing but I am sure that is what you are going for. Maybe a little more description would help of the characters and mentioning the ...

I forgot to answer your question. Yes, I did make up the game. :)

Oh yeah! haha Thanks so much! :)

Thanks a bunch! But I should let you know I haven't edited my chapters since high school. Haha Just the first one and two. I think.